Mid term assignment - Ways of readings Rohini Sharma
Prompt no. 1- Write two poems, each in the voice of any historical or mythological character of your choice. You may want to choose a particular moment in that character's life and attempt to explore how they would respond to that moment.
Poem no. 1 "Draupadi's Cheerharan from Mahabharata context."
Jab mujhe bana diya gaya,
paanch-paaanch ki samuhik patni,
mene koi pratirodh na kiya...
Kyuki usne hi na kiya,
Jo mujhe jeet kar laya tha!!
Pta tha honhaar hai whe...!!
Par Kahi na kahi thi uski bhi chaalaki...
Shesh chaaro bhi chaalak the ...
Aage chalkar Dekha mene
Samay esa viprit aa gaya,
Puri sabha shaant thi...
Sabhi apna sar jhukhaye the!
Tha whe bhi jisne mujhe jeeta .....
Mere sasural ka ek-ek vyakti shaant tha,
bane sbhi gavah us drashya ke,
Jab mujhe nirvashtra kiya ja rha tha|
Kesa hai yeh pitrasttatmak samajh....
Jaha kisi mein bhi, kahi se bhi,
ashaa ki kiran na thi!
Whe Duryodhan dwara,
Mujhe apni jangah par bithane ka......
........ Dussahas !
Koi kaam na aa saka,
Aaya kaam bas mera bhai .....
Jisne Meri laaj rakhi !!
Mila phir barah baras ka......... ........ agyaatvaas!
badla liya gaya us partirodh ka,
Duryodhan ki jangah cheer Kar,
Piya gaya lahu aur ...... Yudh hua
Kurukshetra ki bhoomi mein.....
hui samapt mere pratishodh k aag!!!
Tab barsa dharti par kaal....
Sara Kurukshetra ho gaya laal!
Kuru kul ka jo tha akshat,
Mil gaya dhool mein vikshat !
Poem no.2 - "Shiva's regret when he beheading lord Ganesh"
Kaha mujhe jata racheta sansaar ka,
bani hai drashti - dharti mjhse hi....
Mein hi hu vikraal, trinetra , trishuldhaari mahakaal!!
Piya jisne vishpaan hai,
Bachai pure sansaar ki jaan hai!!
Bana parvati ki dhool se whe,
Vahi nayan - naksh hai ese....
...... Jese mera hi swaroop ho!!
hai Vahi daya ka data
hua mujhse yeh Kesa paap,
Pehchaan na saka apna ansh.
Laga jese kisi or ka balak hai.
Kiya tha usne mujhe rokne ka ....... dussahas!
Tha krodh ka Hahakaar,
Na rha kisi or par bas,
Kar diya mene ghor paap,
Kar diya alag us balak k Sar se dhar....
Tuta jab maa ka tap,
Dhar Hua sar se alag ...
Kese hui vichlit krodh k agni ,
Jisne mujhe mere ansh se dur kiya...
Saja mili parvati k .....
Jisne mjhe khud se Alag kiya!
Samay esa tha kuch jaan na saka,
Sahi galat ko pehchaan na saka!
Bhejha apne sevako ko ,
Phir se dhundhne manav jesa ....
Kisi pashu, pakshi ka ansh.
Socha ki shayad maaf ho Jaye bhul.....
Meri,
Karna phir se paschataap hai,
Joda phir se sar ko Dhar se.....
Naya swaroop, Naya vardaan,
Mila phir ek Naya naam.....
Ganesh ko !!
Kahe Jana vala whe Ab Gajraaj hai!
Prompt No. 3- Write two poems, each using repetition of a word or a phrase. Think of our classroom discussion where we realized how repetition achieve different effects, whether it be leaving weight, creating irony, exploring, multiple meaning of the same word or a phrase, among others.
Poem No. 1 " Dekho....hara bhara basant hai aaya"
Dekho.... Hara bhara basant hai aaya,
Sath m apne rango ko laya....
Har Jagah Chai khushhaali hai.
Ketli sang Chai ki pyaali hai
Man ko Kitna rujhata hai,
Jab mausam basant ka aata hai!
Charon taraf ek naya umang hai Chaya,
Per-patto ka alag roop hai samaya.
Naye phoolon ka bhi aagman Hua hai,
Neele aakaash k bhi swagat Hua haih !
Dekho.....!!! Lehlaata basant hai aaya,
Apne sath ek naya kaarvaan laya.
Har ek or Nahi khushboo hai chaayi,
Phir saanjh k chahal - pahal hai aayi!
Jese maano charon taraf nya peher hai.
Jab bhi basant aaya hai....
Apne sang ek naya sandesha laya hai..
Na Jane ku priye ka dil ghabraya hai.!!
Hai naya drashya samne...
Hai nayi Khushi nayan mein!!
Phir bhi kuch samajh na aya hai,
Na jane yeh Kesa basant aaya hai!
Lekin jab - jab basant aaya hai,
Jamuna k tat par phir se mela lgaya hai...
Har ghat v mandiron ko sajaya hai...
Khel rhi hai goraiyaa phir se,
Baj rhi hai payaliya phir se,
Bol rhi hai koyaliya phir se...
Maano jese kuch or Nahi
Bas basant hi hai aaya
Kahi Kahi udaasi chehre hai,
Har taraf kahde bas pehere hai,
Apno se milne k aas mein .....
Khade hai aakr door - daras mein
Par khadi beech me ek diwaar hai,
Har kisi ka Sath us paar hai!
Kesa aabhas h yeh basant ka,
Jo bediyaa hai charon or
Phir bhi kehte hai....
Dekho.....! Hara bhara basant aaya ..!!
Poem no. 2" Mera bhi man karta hai "
Mera bhi man karta hai,
Roz savere uth kar
Ache ache kapde pehen Kar
Peeth par bastan latkau
Or padhne jau!!!!
Na jane ku yeh baat samajh nhi aati....
Ku amma dusro ke ghar,
Jhadu pocha krne hai jaati??
Ku yeh bartan malti or
Kyu whe kapde dhoti hai??
Har roz savere uth kr.....
Amma yhi kehti
Bin Kar kooda-kachra Lao!!
Lekin man to mera bhi krta hai,
Peeth par bastan latkaun or padhne jau!
Tbhi achanka ballu bola,
Mt dekh khuli Aankh se sapne....
Chaand Abhi bhut door hai.
Or haath hai chote apne!
Kahi baar esa suna hai,
Aata hai to bhut kuch hai hmare liye
Par koi raaste mein chat Kar jata hai.
Mera bhi to man krta hai,
Peeth par bastab latkau
Or padhne jau!!
Prompt no. 9 Choose any two chapters from Art spigelman's 'Maus' and write two poems based on your impressions from these chapters.
Poem no. 1 first chapter from book one.
Some autumns after the war,
The world began to change,
Don't know......? But it....!
Where the people are
But one thing is always there
What is called as 'hope'
The father has grown up old.
He was asked to tell.....
About the life and experiences ....
During the holocaust ..
The curiosity of a child is there.....
The behavior, emotions, softness, happiness.
All things affected by the situation
Peddling on his exercise bike,
Is remain only source for alive.
The question is asked.
How his parents met??
Unlike the film .. .
The love triangle is always there
Between both.
As they apart from each other!
As like sun and moon!!
Poem no. 2 chapter two from book one.
Again the world has changed.
How religion has spread.
People differed from each other
The things are now shaped !
Time also changed.
He visits quite regularly,
To his father.....
Now hears more and more his father's stories.....
Father lives depends on the pills
One for diabetes and other are kills.
Again that past-present-past moment,
Shifting those topic to topic....
Guilt is always there between
In the eyes of Father and sons .....!
How is emotional moments
Where words remain silence,
And sensational eyes only speak.
Idea of domination
Questions of class, castes, money,
......... Always remain...
Anti-semitism is also on the rise....
That indicates social class based!
Where no one is happy
But rather than ray of the hope.
Poem no. 1 "Draupadi's Cheerharan from Mahabharata context."
Jab mujhe bana diya gaya,
paanch-paaanch ki samuhik patni,
mene koi pratirodh na kiya...
Kyuki usne hi na kiya,
Jo mujhe jeet kar laya tha!!
Pta tha honhaar hai whe...!!
Par Kahi na kahi thi uski bhi chaalaki...
Shesh chaaro bhi chaalak the ...
Aage chalkar Dekha mene
Samay esa viprit aa gaya,
Puri sabha shaant thi...
Sabhi apna sar jhukhaye the!
Tha whe bhi jisne mujhe jeeta .....
Mere sasural ka ek-ek vyakti shaant tha,
bane sbhi gavah us drashya ke,
Jab mujhe nirvashtra kiya ja rha tha|
Kesa hai yeh pitrasttatmak samajh....
Jaha kisi mein bhi, kahi se bhi,
ashaa ki kiran na thi!
Whe Duryodhan dwara,
Mujhe apni jangah par bithane ka......
........ Dussahas !
Koi kaam na aa saka,
Aaya kaam bas mera bhai .....
Jisne Meri laaj rakhi !!
Mila phir barah baras ka......... ........ agyaatvaas!
badla liya gaya us partirodh ka,
Duryodhan ki jangah cheer Kar,
Piya gaya lahu aur ...... Yudh hua
Kurukshetra ki bhoomi mein.....
hui samapt mere pratishodh k aag!!!
Tab barsa dharti par kaal....
Sara Kurukshetra ho gaya laal!
Kuru kul ka jo tha akshat,
Mil gaya dhool mein vikshat !
Poem no.2 - "Shiva's regret when he beheading lord Ganesh"
Kaha mujhe jata racheta sansaar ka,
bani hai drashti - dharti mjhse hi....
Mein hi hu vikraal, trinetra , trishuldhaari mahakaal!!
Piya jisne vishpaan hai,
Bachai pure sansaar ki jaan hai!!
Bana parvati ki dhool se whe,
Vahi nayan - naksh hai ese....
...... Jese mera hi swaroop ho!!
hai Vahi daya ka data
hua mujhse yeh Kesa paap,
Pehchaan na saka apna ansh.
Laga jese kisi or ka balak hai.
Kiya tha usne mujhe rokne ka ....... dussahas!
Tha krodh ka Hahakaar,
Na rha kisi or par bas,
Kar diya mene ghor paap,
Kar diya alag us balak k Sar se dhar....
Tuta jab maa ka tap,
Dhar Hua sar se alag ...
Kese hui vichlit krodh k agni ,
Jisne mujhe mere ansh se dur kiya...
Saja mili parvati k .....
Jisne mjhe khud se Alag kiya!
Samay esa tha kuch jaan na saka,
Sahi galat ko pehchaan na saka!
Bhejha apne sevako ko ,
Phir se dhundhne manav jesa ....
Kisi pashu, pakshi ka ansh.
Socha ki shayad maaf ho Jaye bhul.....
Meri,
Karna phir se paschataap hai,
Joda phir se sar ko Dhar se.....
Naya swaroop, Naya vardaan,
Mila phir ek Naya naam.....
Ganesh ko !!
Kahe Jana vala whe Ab Gajraaj hai!
Prompt No. 3- Write two poems, each using repetition of a word or a phrase. Think of our classroom discussion where we realized how repetition achieve different effects, whether it be leaving weight, creating irony, exploring, multiple meaning of the same word or a phrase, among others.
Poem No. 1 " Dekho....hara bhara basant hai aaya"
Dekho.... Hara bhara basant hai aaya,
Sath m apne rango ko laya....
Har Jagah Chai khushhaali hai.
Ketli sang Chai ki pyaali hai
Man ko Kitna rujhata hai,
Jab mausam basant ka aata hai!
Charon taraf ek naya umang hai Chaya,
Per-patto ka alag roop hai samaya.
Naye phoolon ka bhi aagman Hua hai,
Neele aakaash k bhi swagat Hua haih !
Dekho.....!!! Lehlaata basant hai aaya,
Apne sath ek naya kaarvaan laya.
Har ek or Nahi khushboo hai chaayi,
Phir saanjh k chahal - pahal hai aayi!
Jese maano charon taraf nya peher hai.
Jab bhi basant aaya hai....
Apne sang ek naya sandesha laya hai..
Na Jane ku priye ka dil ghabraya hai.!!
Hai naya drashya samne...
Hai nayi Khushi nayan mein!!
Phir bhi kuch samajh na aya hai,
Na jane yeh Kesa basant aaya hai!
Lekin jab - jab basant aaya hai,
Jamuna k tat par phir se mela lgaya hai...
Har ghat v mandiron ko sajaya hai...
Khel rhi hai goraiyaa phir se,
Baj rhi hai payaliya phir se,
Bol rhi hai koyaliya phir se...
Maano jese kuch or Nahi
Bas basant hi hai aaya
Kahi Kahi udaasi chehre hai,
Har taraf kahde bas pehere hai,
Apno se milne k aas mein .....
Khade hai aakr door - daras mein
Par khadi beech me ek diwaar hai,
Har kisi ka Sath us paar hai!
Kesa aabhas h yeh basant ka,
Jo bediyaa hai charon or
Phir bhi kehte hai....
Dekho.....! Hara bhara basant aaya ..!!
Poem no. 2" Mera bhi man karta hai "
Mera bhi man karta hai,
Roz savere uth kar
Ache ache kapde pehen Kar
Peeth par bastan latkau
Or padhne jau!!!!
Na jane ku yeh baat samajh nhi aati....
Ku amma dusro ke ghar,
Jhadu pocha krne hai jaati??
Ku yeh bartan malti or
Kyu whe kapde dhoti hai??
Har roz savere uth kr.....
Amma yhi kehti
Bin Kar kooda-kachra Lao!!
Lekin man to mera bhi krta hai,
Peeth par bastan latkaun or padhne jau!
Tbhi achanka ballu bola,
Mt dekh khuli Aankh se sapne....
Chaand Abhi bhut door hai.
Or haath hai chote apne!
Kahi baar esa suna hai,
Aata hai to bhut kuch hai hmare liye
Par koi raaste mein chat Kar jata hai.
Mera bhi to man krta hai,
Peeth par bastab latkau
Or padhne jau!!
Prompt no. 9 Choose any two chapters from Art spigelman's 'Maus' and write two poems based on your impressions from these chapters.
Poem no. 1 first chapter from book one.
Some autumns after the war,
The world began to change,
Don't know......? But it....!
Where the people are
But one thing is always there
What is called as 'hope'
The father has grown up old.
He was asked to tell.....
About the life and experiences ....
During the holocaust ..
The curiosity of a child is there.....
The behavior, emotions, softness, happiness.
All things affected by the situation
Peddling on his exercise bike,
Is remain only source for alive.
The question is asked.
How his parents met??
Unlike the film .. .
The love triangle is always there
Between both.
As they apart from each other!
As like sun and moon!!
Poem no. 2 chapter two from book one.
Again the world has changed.
How religion has spread.
People differed from each other
The things are now shaped !
Time also changed.
He visits quite regularly,
To his father.....
Now hears more and more his father's stories.....
Father lives depends on the pills
One for diabetes and other are kills.
Again that past-present-past moment,
Shifting those topic to topic....
Guilt is always there between
In the eyes of Father and sons .....!
How is emotional moments
Where words remain silence,
And sensational eyes only speak.
Idea of domination
Questions of class, castes, money,
......... Always remain...
Anti-semitism is also on the rise....
That indicates social class based!
Where no one is happy
But rather than ray of the hope.
Hey good poems, but the one which speaks about Draupadi, i found her character too passive. Maybe you cold have given her more agency, as your depiction of Draupadi is typical to how she has been represented over the years.
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